I'm not really a fan of some of the dialogue in this, especially how much of an incel the MC can be (especially cause like the little bit of him you see he's hot? I guess he wasn't before the story begins but still). And the descriptions during the sex scenes can be kinda off putting tbh. Some things that happen in this are pretty strange too.
The art is quite good though and the music is nice too( I like the at home music), I wish there was a few more tracks.
I also wanna say how much I absolutely loved the pegging scene with Jacklyn, the art is fantastic (the mask, the stockings, the choker, the way the MC is drawn. the pose is all so hot). Great job on that.
I would love one or two gay options.